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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。7 A9 w* M4 g7 e9 {

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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5 ]1 z. Y2 q0 u( U  S& L% E$ T7 Ktvb now,tvbnow,bttvbAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...0 l( b8 P  K9 y* Y5 S* E' g( r

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6 T" j; L8 ^  Q/ a5 D) ftvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb" o3 }$ \5 b4 K0 f. S" e1 [9 y2 h
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A Path Less Traveled公仔箱論壇+ p  I: V6 w  u: J( A7 X; C* v
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknownwww2.tvboxnow.com* X3 @# r# l! u4 U+ z6 X

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/ s8 ^% M9 l5 h- |" H' e1 g$ ~/ \Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you8 x9 Z3 |2 ^$ q( r) o8 W7 B1 ~( `

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?- q6 a' ^. K: W/ N. M; \& w+ T

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。8 F; s: v# \: Z& I
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