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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。! Z9 s4 ~# d/ {  P

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# `# g3 e  m: B* f: p公仔箱論壇If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.公仔箱論壇4 ~4 q9 T& d7 M1 r0 q! r
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A Path Less Traveled
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; P0 }2 [. G5 |' x/ t2 [6 gChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..( L; W- |" l, z  U, S

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?- k/ E* |7 J' s& z& ?

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.  x6 J/ Y( m4 B; K' ~1 H

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